Here it is. The last chapter is done. The first segment only has some additional dialogue referencing the Church. The second is mostly the same. The third though is all new and it’s a pretty major addition.
I’ve still got the afterword left, but once that’s done I’ll be looking to upload the new version to B-T. After that, volume 2!
The epilogue has now been finished. This short segment includes the biggest addition thus far, introducing us to the school that will be the setting of future volumes.
Just the final chapter segments and the afterword left to do. It seems that Final Chapter has an entirely new section as well.
Chapter 7 is now finished being reviewed and updated. Mostly some improvements to the translation. Notably, the chant Tobio uses has been almost completely reworked.
I did have some delays with this chapter due to internet issues, but everything seems to be up and running for the moment. I might miss my goal of finishing this month, but it won’t be much longer.
So it’s a few days later than I intended, but the updated version of Slashdog vol 1 ch 6 is finished. As in the earlier chapters, no major changes other than illustrations. Most of the differences are from me improving upon my earlier work. In fact, outside of the bit about Tobio’s parents in the prologue, the biggest changes in the Japanese version are slight changes in the wording of certain things, a couple of sentences that have been expanded, and a number of sentences that have been shortened or outright removed. Other than those, the only new bit was Lavinia’s last name being included.
My current goal is to finish Slashdog vol 1 this month so I can start on vol 2. I might try to finish Extra Stage as well. I don’t intend to continue work on Railgun PSP though before starting on Slashdog.